The life of Me

Just a story of a person who has gone through some things.Original. Short Version.

I wake up early and think what am I gonna do today and why am I going to do it do I have a purpose do I need to do something about. Well ,*breath out* I don't know what to do I am just a person a person who goes to school and thinks "why ?" I tell myself " Do this it will do something towards your future.", but in that I what? , what do I need to do is there something I as a person can do to make it any better because if there is I would gladly hope so I wake up go to school and do work schoolwork I try to be different and change what I do daily I think and try to be better than yesterday the day I woke up and thought Why? because that was the day I didn't feel the same the day I felt different why? ... The only reason I feel like this probably cause of someone , someone who can cause this a ripping through somewhere in my own soul, my body and my heart.. and I am just a person who felt different the day the surprise happened and here I am writing about why? cause in the reality I don't have the strength to bring the problem , and what really matters because I am a person he ,she , me. I am a person who doesn't understand all things . But I do know one thing that my problem isn't really what is going to matter but what matters is my future Why? oh why the same question , well I have an answer , it's because the only thing that really matters is what you think not what others think, or so we all think , am I right or am wrong I don't know why? cause I am just one person the person who doesn't really change anything the person who cares.

The world has change in various ways and I don't think I am ready to start this change yet it's not that I matter but others matter it's not I its we that makes the world go round yet we can change in various ways and it won't matter it's not we yet it is one person can change but we all have to change why? because the world demands us to change the world , who has dictated the way we speak , write, eat, sleep, and even the way we feel about something because I don't matter the only reason that I can and can't go on is with hope ,dreams and wishes . Yet the only thing I want is the only thing I'm being denied , the only thing I would really fight over . Hopes, dreams and wishes are something that sometimes can't be achieved unless we try out hardest and our best but the only reason is that yet what happens if someone gets that , can you do anything about can you can we?

Well Thank You for reading I will continue this rant tomorrow when I wake up or something.

Have a good day.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Alex Carter]

I like it. I do believe there is a hidden pain beneath all the tirade. Perhaps a feeling of loving someone that doesn't love you back. That really is quite painful, and hard to describe or explain. I hope to continue reading your rant, when you wake up. :)

[Juan Rangel]

I have had many thoughts and i just kind of though it up and it just came to me like a lightning it just struck me thank you for all of the reviewers thank you very much! As time goes I hope to become a better writer and I am very thankful for all of the responses I will try to make it better as I learn new writing methods.

[alanwgraham]

This story gives a very immediate insight into your outlook and thoughts. It communicates that well as it it a kind of 'stream of consciousness' piece of writing. It might seem old fashioned to you but taking a bit of time to go through this and divide it into sentences with punctuation will help a lot to get your message over unambiguously.
You should persevere with your rant!
Well done,
Alan