Carcinoma Wide

Carcinoma Wide

A Poem by Jerusalem Cricket
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Unfiltereds.

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strait crazy

saintly mania raving.

new age jainist phasers
sang they praises
like
'hey mr bojangles,
go mangle up the angle,
shake shake shake the frame
& they'll thank you later.'

...sorry not today.

I'm feeling under the
earthquake weather.
wallowing wonder
wandered thru the desert
following the devil
on great endeavors
to make it rain feathers
that sound like thunder.

famous as ever
nameless as heaven

to say the least
I'm slaying beasts that
came from me
in the first place.
this is lovehate.
lovehate lovehate.
& it's useless.

just lemme set the mood.

it's stupid
brutish beauty
mooing truly bluesy
marks & bruises
infused with martian
harmony incarnate,
caramelized carnage
set to soothing violent music.

broke record store cliché
faded to frustration feeding
a creaturely need for creation
& hellish lust for selfdestruction.

-nothing special-
just an absolute mess who
dilute the stress through allusion
allegory alliteration
hallucination delusion

b***h it's a celebration.

tell the rest those losers
that got left I'm doing my best
even though I'm pretty upset
with how it's all panning out.

oh well I guess.

© 2015 Jerusalem Cricket


Author's Note

Jerusalem Cricket
iii

... lmao idntevnknwtho.
C:

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hah it's brutally honest and really great :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, I certainly didn't expect that rollercoaster ride! You are one heck of a good writer, that's for sure! I never really see any writing that could possibly be rap(that is if this piece is meant to be a rap) on this website, which is such a shame, because it can be quite fantastic, as you have just demonstrated here! There were so many things I love about this piece that I can't even elaborate on it all. Superb job, you have just earned my highest respect as a writer(I know that probably doesn't mean much, lol) :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Jerusalem Cricket

9 Years Ago

nah man I appreciate it. & I feel it's too erratic to actually be rap. definitely some influence tho.. read more
like being dropped into a moving car and then dropped out of one. the motion of feeling stopped is so quick.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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