Freezerburn

Frazzle-dazzled.

call the cops.
they cooking rocks
in a shanty town compound
its just how they get down
most denounceable settlement
heroine needles nettle men
shredded by early elements
surely only pure irrelevents
no evidence of life
that reflected
anything intelligent
they were like
hell with it;
preferred not
to confer the
elephant in the parlor
though of pachyderm stature
he still delicate & he starvin.
attention ya'll.
there's histrionic
insect larva writhing
inside dying bodies
of constants.
wanting nothing but to be alive
to watch the sky vomit lights
contrite with wasting time & space
decided to face what made the comets
atum & adam & the
atomic bomb whatchacallit.
dizzy sassed her,
kiss me a*s slapper
pass the days faster
calmly
this was a disaster
it sounds so wrong
but
how else do you say
it seems
there is no
safe explaination
that demons &
godless heathens
still hold faith in unseen reason
aurical feelings bottomless meanings &
improbable teachings
exploring the being
being anything
more than whimsy.

Author's Note

Perhaps.

Reviews

[I Shred This Cabbage]

I feel beat poetry influence in this...wonderful! it has a living heartbeat, it pulses with such energy. keep up the good work :)

[Chadvonswan]

This has got a jazzy, cracked out tone to it. Like nostalgia in the same jar as my crystal blue. Perhaps.

[Saddam]

pass the days faster
calmly
this was a disaster
it sounds so wrong
but
how else do you say

Interesting write dear friend. An enjoyable piece.