Daze Work

You know, I've never even seen fireflies.

Now let us bow our heads,
lest we all forget.

Lucid as stale cigarette
leaning in &
lingering then
leaving quite the
dreamy impression
like a quiet
demonic possession

I dunno
you sure man,
it's...pretty sexy.

ahem.

this heavenly cell
it smells of
skin & sweat &
sin & obsession
this exotic & chaotic
harmonic aggression
it tells no lies
it asks no questions
it simply taps into
the well fed perception
line behind a 3rd albino eye
but it leaves the others blind.

Deep in the diamond mind
of a high priced unlikely
concubine who at times
thought it nice &
glittery to connive with
the swine and mice
all their bittersweet time
all kiped but it was alright
&it all was contrived
by a divine i5
cuz they were
all hypnotized
by the divine i5
and though
I woke enclosed
by a million
murderous crows
I walked out alive &
I was just fine so
I'm moving this
medicine show
elsewhere &
maybe there
I might find
someone else
who knows
or at the very least
they'll care.

God, I hope they'll
know how to care.

Sorta orphan
morphed morbid to a
tortured torrid orchid
prone to contortion &
all too often to retortion

BOO W***E

let me tell the story
I know my view's
distorted
but you're too
vexy & boring
to even try
& epitomize
some kinda
taboo like
a one nine
'42 abortion.

To hell
with your orthdodoxy,

give us a performance.

Applause.

Applause.

Reviews

[Still Growing]

Poem has a nice and jittery style; the rhymes flow smoothly, without losing any of the message.
Oh, and the message was.. Worth the finding :)

[Laura Lynn]

Sorta orphan -------------------------this might be my favorite part, these 5 lines
morphed morbid to a
tortured torrid orchid
prone to contortion &
all too often to retortion

This is so jiving, it's like a rap, it's not sssoooooo perfect but I feel like it is, so you're going to have to judge it, later when if, most times I write stuff and it just gets lost, so it's good to share here and the whole process is helpful it can give one a good feeling but we have to stay real yo

[The Twin Arenas]

so crazy. who uses the word "kiped"?

I'm pretty into your writing. It's so fast.