Join Me?

Could we leave today, 

And would you come with me

To disregard all we've come to know, 

If it meant a chance to brush the impossible? 

Even, 

If it was just for a moment? 

Oh, 

And you can't come alone, 

You'll have to bring your passion; 

your pen, 

your point shoes, 

your pencil,

your voice, 

your lense, 

your journal, 

your sketchbook. 

Because we'll travel through space and time, 

We'll sing away improbability.

Dance out anger. 

Sketch away distrust. 

Write off hate. 

And leave all that's left, for expression. 

So, 

Will you come to live? 

And escape the expected, 

Screw the tolerated. 

And live for the exhileration

Of pure, 

Undeluded, 

Creation. 

Author's Note

I'd be honored for any feedback you might have to offer.

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

This is something special...

[Sola]

Thank you, that's very kind.

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~ i admire your faith in faith (read creation/the universe) immensely... and i sincerely hope you'll be posting more work soon... for selfish reasons... (because i love to read what you write)...

[Sola]

Thank you so much, I truly appreciate it. I might be putting up the first chapter of a novel I'm attempting to transcribe, however my chapters are a bit lengthy so it's doubtful I'll expect many reads.

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~ you're very welcome... ~ and, don't worry... there are many on this site who read and write novels...

[Frieda P]

Why don't I ever get invites like this?! This is masterfully done, I love your style...

[Sola]

Why thank you, yes wouldn't it just be absolutely wonderful if everyone simply selected words in a more careful manner in such a way as to craft a bit of prose in every sentence, my goodness it would be far more interesting.

[SparrowSong]

Ahh...this is yet another wonderful write from you, I love your voice in this one, full you life and passion for the journey of creative expression. Nicely done!

[Sola]

thank you so much, it was very kind of you to read this one let alone both.