Cheeky idiom

Farewell arms

Sit down for a moment

             take this down on some flax seed

I

am 

speaking to                 him.

I 

am

sparking his                dreams.

This is important for all the right reasons and there is absolutely nothing off, odd, strange

         about lanterns.

                         When was the last time 

                         this was the first time we brought something other than

             abscess

             drudgery

             excess            and 

it 

feels

like

               Today will be appropriate.

                                                                        Jimmy, the knives

                                                                        Frances, the legs

A true work of impressionism.              So long

                                           Good luck

                                  An aphoristic display of ignorance amongst 

so much 

light.

Author's Note

Criticism is always welcome any and all.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the set-up of the poem. Allow the reader to fall into good thoughts.
"When was the last time
this was the first time we brought something other than abscess
drudgery
excess "
A very good ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote