One more

Wake him up

  In a moment 

as such, 

remember that trunk in the corner 

near his convenient tone establishing imagery.

  Light that audience selector of yours.

Breathe the credibility and all its symbolic tension

in peacetime

     love

         is boring,

like slobbering retards attempting 

      the possible and mad.

Author's Note

Criticism is always welcome any and all.

Reviews

[allie_arrowz]

i read a few of your other poems and this is definitely my favorite.
i like your style of writing.
anyways, this poem is intriguing and begs you to read it a few times.
i like how you separate "love is boring" so it stands out.

[Coyote Poetry]

"love is boring,
like slobbering retards attempting
the possible and mad."
I like the way you use the language. Made your point direct and with honest and strong thoughts. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote