Passion

He was grace,

in name and in essence.

To those he loved he exuded strength, life, laughter, and light.

But to me, also sorrow.

For circumstance had bound him to my best friend,

through whom we met in the warmth and serenity of his home.

Nothing from the first day I saw him, 

and no one has it happened to me since,

has ever been this frightening and as confusing.

For no person I have ever known, 

has done more to make me feel more sure,

more insecure, more important, and less significant.

Reviews

[Liverpoolfan]

This is really good. From the first line I was hooked. Nice job. The poem flow really well.

[there is no more from m..]

I love this well done :)

[melissa]

good detail:)

[Kayla]

Wow!! This is really good!! Thte title deff fits it!! Great job!!

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

Go CALLEY AND LUISYPOOH(LUIS) MY FAVORITE COUPLE.....u should give him this poem 2 read....it ROKS......
p.s. its christina from school kk bye

[Silvario]

A very nice piece. Wonderfuly written and beautiful to read. You have talent. keep it up. :)

[Wildecat]

I also enjoyed reading this poem, well done.

[Phenomena]

It sounds like a wedding vow:) jk. but that's a good thing. I really liked it. Oh and just wondering... are you refering it to "You know who: your boyfriend" No but seriously great description:)