Potent

          Almost as potent as the inspiration you give me to plumb the deepest fathoms of my soul. To where in the deepest trenches where the wounds lie, even the most intensive and fiery passion of love could not fill those gaping punctures. But only the one, fallacious immortal God that can heal and recondition those aching fissures that burn with a fiery thirst and hunger for the everlasting love, that only The Lord Jesus Christ can save you from.

Author's Note

please write a review, this is the first poem i have ever wrote!

Reviews

[Markymark]

There's nothing to judge....Softball girl. Great ink...did you mean to have the gaps? This might read easier if you just penned it down straight. The meter is slow enough to give the reader time to digest each line before reading the next. I agree with your summation...by the way. I love your style. I'll be seeing you in here.

Markymark

[Phenomena]

U copied the first sentence off of Family Guy!!!!!!!!! GASP!!!!

[PandaGirl]

Hey SoftballBabe101 that was a spectakular poem it was really really GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!April

[Greg Skura]

Short and sweet and to the point!!! I enjoyed this poem! Thank You for sharing!

[Voice]

Oh this is so beautiful and moving. Its flow and meaning are just gorgeous...

Voice

[Vaishali..^_^]

oh..!nice one....short and sweet...!great work..^_^

[Kelley]

Short but sweet. I liked it.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Phenomena]

Great description! however, for a poem, it is a little too short. Edit this and maybe add more lines...
awesome sentence though:)