There is no subject on the earth

There is no subject on the earth

A Poem by Sofia
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A hurriedly written poem...

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There is no subject on the earth
Which I can master since birth

Starting with English
The words are too minglish

Why can 'it' be a preposition?
Instead of being a pronoun with a neutral position

I can't understand why Julius Caesar was killed
By a friend with jealously filled

Then comes maths, which I know not
With mensuration I always fought

Isn't Switzerland famous for plates?
Ohh, wait I forgot it was chocolates

That's my problem with Geography
I don't seem to remember any of the philosophy

History was always the boring kind
About ancient people we have to find

Doesn't matter exist in 5 states?
I thought that was what Chemistry states

Newton thought apples fell because of gravity
I wonder what makes cherries fall
Isn't Physics about that all

Last of all, Biology is the subject I love
But the drawings are way too tough

So now I think you got to know
There is no subject on the earth
Which I can master since birth

© 2017 Sofia


Author's Note

Sofia
Hope you all like it..I wrote this in a jiffy...please feel free to criticize..

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I really like this, it's a different turn on things and I like the reality of the way you write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you for ur kind review...glad you liked it..
You wrote so lovely poem, dear....the beautiful rhyming words ....so cute poem...'m waiting for anther such lovely poem, Sofia.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Priyanshi di...I appreciate ur kind review 😃
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, dear.
hahahha.....i remembered my 10th grade after reading this poem...pretty work...i loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! Now I'm really really happy😃
Wajiha Nayeem

7 Years Ago

hahaaha...plsr girl.
after such a long time i have read such a humorous piece... good work sofia :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much... I'm glad you found this to be gud😊
Haha, that's beautiful and you presented in a great tone..I loved it...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you for ur honourable review... I'm super happy...
Aah that's amazing....The way you presented this is amazing...nicely written..I loved it...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much... I'm glad you loved it
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
"History was always the boring kind
About ancient people we have to find

Doesn't matter exist in 5 states?
I thought that was what Chemistry states "
I like this part!

A few quick things I thought could make it flow better: Why can 'it' be a preposition?
Instead of a pronoun with a neutral position (remove "being")

I thought that is what Chemistry states (instead of was)

"Last of all, Biology is the subject I love
But the drawings are way too tough "

this part maybe make it rhyme so it flows with the rest

that's all! overall pretty good for writing in a jiffy!




Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the constructive review. I'm really grateful to you for pointing out the error.. read more

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Sofia

Kolkata, West Bengal, India



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