Friendship

Friendship

A Poem by Sofia
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Just a short poem on friendship..

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An imperishable and unbreakable bond we share,
All the troubles together we bear
When one's hurt the others care,
So strong our bond is that none can tear,

Yes my friend, that's the FRIENDSHIP we share.

© 2017 Sofia


Author's Note

Sofia
A really short poem..i wrote it while completing my school project on friendship.. Please feel free to criticize...I would love to improve on my writing skills..

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No this is perfect! It shouldnt be longer. Beauty is in simplicity. This defines true friendship something which is rare.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much.. I'm glad that you found it to be perfect😃
This is short and simple in the best of ways. There aren't any frills or overly fancy language because it doesn't need it- it would probably sound out of place.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for ur kind words..I appreciate it..😃
How sweet....Loved the rhyming as well...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!! I thought not to post it cuz it wasn't tht gud..but seeing ur reviews I'm feel.. read more
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Always give your work a try... You are most welcome...
Haha, indeed it is a beautiful bond..I loved it...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! I'm really happy..
Brb sending this to my best friend omg i loved this !!! Cute stuff

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! You made me super happy..glad to know u loved it..

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Added on June 1, 2017
Last Updated on June 16, 2017
Tags: Friends, best friends forever

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Sofia
Sofia

Kolkata, West Bengal, India



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