Technology

Technology

A Poem by Sofia
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Mobile phones have become a basic necessity​...

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Mobiles have a strong grip on the world
People are spotted on the couch all curled,
Juggling between social networking sites
Wasting time in making up fights.

WhatsApp, Facebook, Instagram and what not
Teenagers mostly you'll find up caught,
Laughing at memes and things like that
Sitting on the bed getting plump and fat.

But worst of all their eye sight is
Staring at the monster who makes a hiss,
Every time a message is delivered,
A wide range of sound can be heard.

Parents are heard shouting about
But children don't pay attention to their shout,
Mobiles may be fun, they may be cool
But the one who uses them remains a fool.

© 2017 Sofia


Author's Note

Sofia
Heyy everyone!! Hope you all liked it. I had this theme in my mind for days and so I thought to pen it down. Please feel free to criticize.

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While I agree children are too attached, as one who spends many hours in waiting rooms (my disabled Veteran husband and my failing mother) without my phone with Kindle, and now the Cafe ), these hours would be unbearably longer. Thank you for a good read this morning.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you for kind visit and review ma'am..glad you liked it :)
Haha, nice ending. This is indeed a quite debatable issue. Technology has advantages as well as disadvantages. You've penned down your opinion on this subject quite nicely. Well done. Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Zoe! Really glad seeing your review.
Zoya

7 Years Ago

No worries :)
Absolutely correct.... we, people, are attached to gadgets like phone, laptop, etc. so much that sometimes we ignore incidents or anything going around us...so much indulgence is affecting our health too...great poem, Sofia...Keep it up, dear.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for ur kind review..im glad that u liked it..
Priyanshi

7 Years Ago

My pleasure, Sofia.
This is such an honest poem and shows the realities of our worlds obsession with technology !!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!! I appreciate ur review 😃
You said it all to be honest, this is so true!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for giving it a read😊
Well what you wrote is true....;)
Its an informative poem and I loved the rhyme scheme you chose!
Great work, Sofia:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for stopping by and giving this a read😊😊
Hope

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...;)
this is so true...and such a wonderful poem you have written...i loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so muchh!!! 😊😊
One who uses them remains a fool..hahaha..
Honestly a great job, appreviated...I enjoyed it Sofia....:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! Glad to know you enjoyed it!! :)
This is a great poem and sadly the truth of life. A great write and I loved it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sofia

7 Years Ago

Thank you once again dear!!
Sonakshi Arora

7 Years Ago

See i liked it so much that I reviewed it twice :p
Sofia

7 Years Ago

Yeah!!!!😂... I'm happy that you liked it...
This is such a great poem! And sadly the truth. You have conveyed it in a very humorous way! I loved reading it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sonakshi Arora

7 Years Ago

Haha aww that is sooo sweeet
Sofia

7 Years Ago

:D...please post ur works... I'm eager to read them..😃
Sonakshi Arora

7 Years Ago

Aww sure I will :)

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Added on May 20, 2017
Last Updated on May 25, 2017
Tags: Technology, Phones, Teenagers

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Kolkata, West Bengal, India



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