Spring

Spring marks a new beginning and a fresh start for us...

The chilling winter breeze is down
As spring marks its arrival
The beauty of the countryside increases as though,
It were a covert with a lovely hue
The flowers bloom all the way long
The vehicles ply making noise - 'ting tong'
Here comes, buzzing a little bee
Searching for nectar and its home to be
The enthralling atmosphere spreads the message of peace,
As if the place were God's own masterpiece
But Beware, the lovely season brings with it
Diseases such as chickenpox and measles
And soon the warm season prevails,
And because of the heat, people wail
As spring bids adieu to come next year
And summer makes the people to fear.

Author's Note

Pheww!! Posted at last..This is the very first poem of a 12 year old😅 Please feel free to criticize. I wrote this poem long ago in spring but I was to nervous to post it. Do tell me how it is.

Reviews

[Riddhi]

Oh!Its actually nice according to a 12year old and that too first time..My first writing was actually so bad that i still feel nervous to post it here!!! I liked the way you wrote about spring and especially your rhyming words were perfect...
I just wished if it would have you know some more pleasant memories of spring and then you know bad things of summer that will just transport the writer from you know some pleasant things to scorching heat of summer..It would have been more interesting...
But overall this was really nice and you know for a first timer its actually the best you can do first time and that too at the age of 12!!!
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Take care
Riddhi

[Sofia]

Wow! I super happy!! Thank you for ur kind visit...I didn't know that it was good...even I was nervous​ to post this here.. I'm sure ur first poetry was very good..come on..do post it..and yeah, I agree it would have been more interesting that way...but I kinda didn't know what lines to add :p... Take care..

[Sofia]

Forgot to add the "am" before super happy...

[Abraham George]

Oh!Its actually nice according to a 12year old
Riddhi i disagree with this. This poem is actually a good one even for a well experienced writer. so for a 12 year old this is awesome. i am sure that till now i didn't wrote a poem this much good

[Sofia]

Omg! Thanks so much for the compliment :) I'm so so so happy

[pia]

This was a realllyyy cute poem
This poem i can tell you is so on point
I love winters i hate summers tbh
Its so hot where i live at the moment. XD this was well written !!

[Sofia]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate ur review 😃

[Im His Daughter]

Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry.

[Sofia]

Thank you for creating this contest.. winning or loosing doesn't matter to me..all that matters is that I've participated😊

[Krutika]

Yeah I know that feeling of first writeup. It's great isn't it? It's always special and I must say that it reflects your honesty and effort you put creating it. Keep it up :) would love to read more of your work!

[Sofia]

Yeah!! I'm really happy to see so many people liking it..Thank you so much!! I will definitely post something more like this..😊

[Abhishek Asthana]

this is the way to start, i must say,, a good theme to write about and very nicely worded...looking forward to read some more pieces... all the best wishes :)

[Sofia]

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it😊

[Matthew Kult]

The humble beginnings of a poet.

Great Read

Matthew

[Sofia]

Thank you so much!!

[karina]

You are an inspiration to many..keep going :) loved this one

[Sofia]

Thank you so much!! This one made my day!!! :)

[karina]

Always there :)❤ stay happy,girl..

[Sofia]

Of course... I really liked ur writing...i read it just now...

[karina]

omg are you for serious?

[Sofia]

Yeah!! Of course

[Gee]

12 years young...a great job, well done

[Sofia]

Thank you so much!!!

[Surya]

visionary's truth some say....I honestly loved it....
A great start I could say, Keep writing friend...:)

[Sofia]

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you loved it..😊