One day I was a bird

One day I was a bird

A Poem by Nurhanne Hassan

One day  I was a bird
Who had no wings
Instead of running around like my
fellow wingless birds
I sat there and kept staring
at the sky
One day I was a bird
Who thought the stars are his long lost
family who found their hidden wings and fled
without looking back
'You forgot something on earth' I'd cry
Hoping someone would come back
One day I was a bird
Standing helpless
Feeling hopeless
Until I heard a whisper that shook my whole being
I looked up and there she was
The northern star
The brightest star
Who spoke through the sun and smiled in the moon
Her words a gust of life to my lifeless state.
They lifted me up, higher
and higher
I could almost touch the star
Reaching out,
wanting to hold her, to feel her
To be like her for just another day
Yet she stopped me and said
This was better for me
That I belonged on the wingless earth
While she belonged in the soaring skies
I shook with fear and held my stance
Asked her to keep me for one last dance
That sent the clouds and cut open the sky
That grew those trees and helped some birds fly
Looking at them, a tear rolled down my cheek
She just couldn't see what she means to me
We promised that forever is something our hearts are to keep
Abruptly I fell, a crack in my heart
forming with each mile 
Till it was sliced open once 
I landed on my earth
Its contents betraying me, abandoning me
And soaring till they reached their home
Now the whole sky is lit up
by my smithereens
Surrounding the only bliss I've ever known
Embracing the northern star
The brightest star.

© 2014 Nurhanne Hassan


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Wonderful poem yet the ending confused me a bit.
One thing didn't make sense

"Yet she stopped me and said
This was better for me
That I belonged on the wingless earth"

Perhaps you can detail the reason why? Perhaps the idea can be fear that the "wingless bird" would burn (for example). This reason would be more interesting to explore, and create more feelings of breaking bonds or being dismissed. That would really get the readers into it.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Nurhanne Hassan
Nurhanne Hassan

Cairo, Egypt



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