Midnight Delight

A young girl sits apon a hill looking at the wasted beauty the world deems dull....

Lonely I sit upon this hill far from eyes that travel too far,

I sit upon this hill to see this beauty of a sky full of stars, 

This hill of long flowing grass dappled with orange maple oaks,

Down in the city I see cars and buildings as far as the eye can see,

Rushing about life, deeming sight seeing a dull and fruitless tact,

But not I, for upon this hill I notice life is quite repetitive for those folks, 

Not I, because I sit alone upon a hill with long flowing grass

Wet from the dew descending from heaven, I see a moon high up

In the midnight sky descending ever so slowly around the world, 

Unnoticeable to the frivolities of 'life', this wasted beauty deemed dull

By the sea of humans lacking much chivalry, I sit alone 

Hoping to one day see this beauty not wasted, 

For what is a world without beauty? Wasted.

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Ra3helPraise]

Thank you Renee! I looked at your profile and notice were alot alike which i thought was very funny cause not many people I know are moody like me! That is cool that you can almost feel like your this girl. I like to think that im not 'tainted' by the world because there is alot of things wrong with it. Im thinking about writing a story about this girl or maybe a poem. I do rather like the part you mentioned.! Thanks for the review!

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

I really like this. It shows the world in the perspective of someone who hasn't been tainted by what's 'popular' and what's 'right' in the eyes of society. It's very imaginative and you can almost feel like you're sitting on that hill with the girl, or you are her. v That part is my fave (:
"Lonely I sit upon this hill far from eyes that travel too far,
I sit upon this hill to see this beauty of a sky full of stars,"

[Ra3helPraise]

Thank you Kim I appreciate the comment.. Do you think it needs any work? Also do you think the name Midnight Beauty would suit it better? This is the first time I have ever posted anything so I hope to improve it where I need to! Thanks so much your comment means a lot to me.!

[deeps]

I agree with you, Some people just take this world for granted, never realizing what it is for. A open and pondering piece. Enjoyed this alot.