Your hand.

With your hand...

you pulled me through the door.

 

With your hand...

You pushed me to the floor.

 

With your hand...

You grabbed a knife.

 

With your hand...

You took my life.

 

With your hand...

You grasped my heart.

 

With your hand...

You tore it apart.

Reviews

[Laura]

This was really sad, but also it felt very emotional, especially the last few lines. You have a nice style and the repetition of "With your hand..." establishes something, I can picture this whole scene in my head. This is a great poem.

[Moth Phoenix]

aww the last lines of the poem are sad :[ but its a great poem!!! =]