Progression

Progression

A Poem by Carlton Rolle

Assured in travel, I hope this land is speedy.

The daggers of many eyes pierce my soul.

Aching for unions and transgressions to pass.

It isn't like I haven't tried.

It just didn't change.

The future is mold-able, but you must be able to progress.

© 2013 Carlton Rolle


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

An apt sentiment... If we are too much like stone, we will not be able to mold ourselves into the future that we desire; conversely, if we are too soft, we will melt away in the progression of the world outside our windows. The past is the past, and we can only move forward into the "mold-able" future.

I found this piece thought provoking...there is a part of me that wanted a little more explanation of your overall concept--it begins a little differently from where it ends. Other than that, though, I did enjoy the read.

Posted 11 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

117 Views
1 Review
Added on August 15, 2013
Last Updated on August 15, 2013

Author

Carlton Rolle
Carlton Rolle

New York City, NY



About
I write because I must. Keeping towards a way to seek the message. Something that we all need, trust, and love. To speak an existence. To understand something's life. To work on hope and companio.. more..

Writing