I think we've all been in this situation, it's easily relatable. This poem is simple and gets right at the core issue. The breaks seem a little off, like "As I see/You kiss her" those parts might work better as one line. I'd like to see it expanded on, more imagery, more emotion, but that's just my opinion. Overall I liked it.
your one heck of an awesome person and if he cant see it then he can f**k himself cause he doesnt see how amazing of a person you are and i hope you find some made for unlike that bastered no effence
You may never know if they meant those words when they said them too you, but also know they may not mean those words as they speak them to someone else. that is something to see your lover with another, this poem is sad but it is also lovely.
1. That guy is a B*****d.
2. He needs to be neutered.
3. I fiddleybopping love this poem, despite the way it screams Sadness and Hurt.
4. I sincerely hope you find a Man, because he was obviously a Boy.
5. And preferably one that treats you right.
love me or hate me either way you know my name
Hey I'm Taylor! I'm a girl. I'm new at writing. I hope for this site will give me a place to express myself and my ideas! I hope that if you read my w.. more..