Daddy

Daddy

A Poem by So Sick of Love
"

not good just vented out my anger

"

Daddy

Why did you leave?

Did you not care about me?

Or want me?

Was I a disgrace?

Did I mean nothing to you?

Do you ever think of me?

Or even remember me?

Do you wish you stayed?

Or wished you visited?

Daddy

Why did you leave?

© 2011 So Sick of Love


Author's Note

So Sick of Love
honest thoughts

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Yeah Daddy, why?
Why'd you leave this totally awesome writing chick?
Do you NOT know a good thing when you see one?
Dumbass.
Tay, he loves you. He just can't believe the fact that he made you.
I loved this poem. I could practically hear the anger in these sad words.
10 Stars! ^_^ * * * * * * * * * *

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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o i wudnt know wat i'd do if my dad left. You've got awesome talent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


dad is so much important for a family...
asking these questions...will hurt urself..
remembering these circumstances shivers your mind and soul..
nice poem...sad words to end up..

Posted 13 Years Ago


i lik this. u did very good at the flow and emotion. nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sad. Its terrible that people live their children. Horrible in fact. I sorry for you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very strong words from a passionate person.
Maybe you shouldn't be so mad at him. Cause
Maybe he does want to see you, but doesn't know
How to do it. I mean you have to put yourself in his
Shoes, he probably doesn't know where you live. Or
Even if he did, do you expect him to just show up and
Say, hey I'm your scum bag dad that didn't vist or make
A attempt to see you for so long and now I want to be
Part of your life. These people don't know what they are
Talking about. Its harder then what you think.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some questions can't be answered. If they are, then time is always the answer. You can really see the confusion and the anguish bleeding through.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Something can never truly be answered. A sad and powerful poem. Some questions are needed to be answered to make the heart know peace. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Funny you wanted me to read this because I pretty much have a non existant relationship with my dad. These are all the questions I used to ask myself. I like it alot. You can feel the hurt...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very good...it really reminds me of when my first stepfather left my family. It brought up so many questions, just like this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


To have a parent leave a child is heart breaking. I would ask the same questions. The poem's short length reflects to the very core of your feelings to a very simple question: "Why did you leave?"
Good Job! And know you have friends here.
-Jeffrey

Posted 13 Years Ago



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why would i tell you, NC



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