What is....???

just thoughts i decided to write dwon

What is life

Without death?

What is love

Without hate?

What is truth

Without lies? 

Author's Note

honest opinion

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

This reminds me of how people wish for a perfect world full of love, happiness and joy. But like the movie the matrix we now if such a world existed we would reject it, we would find a way to destroy it anyway. The universe has to have balance and as your poem states you must have the good with the bad for that balance. You take it further by exploring how we can not know the good without the bad because both is needed to know the other. Insightful poetry presented in layman's terms for everyone's understanding.

[Adrien Hupp]

i love this poem it asks questions we almost all want to know:)

[Shannon Math]

I have no answers for those questions but other than that....I have one word to say....

AWESOME!

[<3Lil.Bit(:]

Within 6 lines, its like you stuffed 6 million words into it. I had to think about this for a while, and I think its brilliant. You truely are a talented writer.

~Skulli

[An owl on the moon]

This is a profound write, painting the balance of light and shadows... You give us a world to ponder in these six striking lines.

[Coyote Poetry]

The opposite of life. I do believe in karma. All good things will come back to you. Same with the bad. Life is a bridge toward death. It is important to do fun and good thing in the middle. Love and hate are a heart beat a part. Best to be silence when anger overtake our mind. Truth is the way. A liar had no friends. The poem is short. But you ask many important questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[FallenHeroXx]

So thoughtful really kicked my mind in to thinking