What is....???

just thoughts i decided to write dwon

What is life

Without death?

What is love

Without hate?

What is truth

Without lies? 

Author's Note

honest opinion

Reviews

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What is achievement without failure?

OH this is great.
How something so simple can make me so happy is unimaginable, then again being complicated is not what makes something a good read.
Congrats.

[Jeffrey Gershom]

Contrast is needed to know two different things. Unfortunately, with emotions it deals with love and pain. And always, it seems that the pain last longer than the love. Happily, we sometimes find the life, love and truth in the most unlikely places; where their opposites find us everywhere.
I like your poem very much. You don't mince words and say what you feel. Know that you have to feel one to know the other is life, and I wish you the best!
Good Job!

[kill the innocents]

its true.. :) good one :)

[poetic soul]

its true to the hilt!
kudos!

[Light]

this poem is good in it's simplicity. human life, in it's truest nature, always seems to be based on opposites. you beautifully explain this with a simple elegance. everything exist upon the construct of it's opposite yet equal balance

-light-

[Cafe Reader]

Good thoughts!

[LeeLee Ryder]

Direct and to the point.. What if...simply opens up the floodgate to those universal questions, we all ask from time to time. Good job, SSoLove..
LLR

[Lilly Negoi]

a very good extrapolation of the idea of yin and yang :) human beings cannot appreciate the value of good without knowing the value of evil

[Luchia Noname]

life comes with its deaths thats what makes us human
love needs to have its downs to be true
lies r what we do to stray from a path in which we dont wish to enter

hope i answered okay :)

[KAREN]

Honestly I think it speaks for it's self! I me everyone can relate to this. It gets right to the point.