Broken

Broken

A Poem by So Sick of Love

I'm living

But I'm not all there

There's a part of me missing

The part that lets me love

All because you left me

For some other girl

Saying I'm not pretty enough

Laughing when I cry

Laughing at my heart shattering

When i begged for you back

You laughed

All because of you

I lost the will to love

© 2010 So Sick of Love


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So Sick of Love
honest opion

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Straight from the heart. I can really feel the pain and seeing that your new this is a good start. Great write,

Posted 14 Years Ago


this poem is real as it gets i felt your soul on this one.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well the message is clear, and we all experiance heart break. But if he left you for another girl.. he probably wasn't worth your time.

Posted 14 Years Ago


well written. emotional. simple message :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice, a lot of emotion in just a little piece and it's sad that there are people out there that actually put people through this sort of this.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 25, 2010
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