His dear family

Stepping on his toes at every step
Then you need to point out he's inept
You're living in his way

Pointing and jeering at his every flaw
Judged solely by conclusions drawn
You're living in his way

Begging against hope to catch a break
If only you knew what's at stake
You're living in his way

Reviews

[Bluefire]

"You're living in his way"
~*~
It speaks of someone brilliant being put down for simply thinking differently.
Well played.

[Jamil Isimbabi]

i couldn't agree more. everyone has flaws but being able to tolerate each other is the ability most families lack. good write

[HeazerH]

Thanks :). :)

[Jamil Isimbabi]

welcome :))

[Caradoc]

Yea...sometimes family can be like that. Of course, some people are lucky and end up with relatives that are really supportive.

I like the way you conveyed the message in this one. The repetition of the line "you're living in his way" was really well done. It conjured an image in my mind of a bird that cannot fly because of all those that crowd around it.

Nicely done.

-Caradoc

[HeazerH]

I liked the image of the bird, thank you. That image hat you got is exactly what has happened. Sometimes people think they are being supportive but theyre really holding you back.

[Caradoc]

Indeed. You're very welcome. Have a good one. :)

[wordman]

is this parenting at it`s worst nagging at it`s best or just life for most

[HeazerH]

I think it's all of those. :) parents frustrate us, but we love them.

[wordman]

but one day you will be one and you will think you are right and in your eyes you will be

[HeazerH]

I am one lol...I have a two year old though, so I haven't reached the teenage years. :)

[wordman]

well just remember how you feel now parents don`t mean to be strict but they are protecting you
read morewell just remember how you feel now parents don`t mean to be strict but they are protecting you
some will copy there parents but it all comes out in the wash

[HeazerH]

Yeah, I am thankful for the parents that have been there for me. In my case, they arent biological, but theyre still wonderful. Thanks for the advice.

[wordman]

oh hell I`m the last one to give advise just older and wiser

[HeazerH]

I envy those that are older and wiser. I don't wish my life away, but I look forward to the knowledge experience gives.

[Sami Khalil]

"Begging against hope to catch a break
If only you knew what's at stake
You're living in his way"

You write marvelously. Pen on...:).........

[HeazerH]

Thanks a bunch! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome a bunch...:)...................

[A. Amos]

Begging against hope to catch a break
If only you knew what's at stake
You're living in his way

Neatly Writen piece and above verses felt deeply in heart...good job my friend

[HeazerH]

Thank you :). :)