Through the Rain: Ghosts of the Past.

Writen on October 13, 2007. This one is kind of confusing, I was very upset with someone and myself when writing this.

Gripping the sides of the coffin a young man sobbed, as he looked down apon his beloved her rosey cheeks paled for all eterinty and her bright eyes now closed tightly shut. His tears rolled off his face and landed on her cheeks. An older man, only slightly older than the young man stepped up and placed his hand in a friendly gesture on his shoulder. Looking him straight in the eye the older man told him in a soft voice, his eyes beholding an ancient sadness that seemed endless to the young man, "Sometimes... it's easier just to erase her from your memory" he paused the sadness growing deeper still "It's hard but e  ventually the pain will reside." To the young  mans suprise a single tear rushed down the other man's cheek. This man.. he couldn't be.. the one she.... loved more than me? The young man thought to his self.

In her spirital form she looked apon her two true loves; slowly, gracefully she hovered toward them. Although she knew was usless, she took one of each man's hand and held it in one of hers, and she asked "Please don't cry. Don't be sad. Not over some silly girl like me." what would have been tears streamed down her face in a river of salty water "I love you both so much, I beg of you please what ever you do don't cry" Thunder shook the small town church, a feeling of warmth spread through out both of the men. The eldest smiled slightly "Knowing her like I did, she wouldn't want us to be sad, if she saw us now she'd probably send us a string of pitiful threats" The younger man looked at him and nodded in agreement "Well" The older man started "Have a nice life" the other looked up at him wide eyed "your not going to the funeral?" The older man shook his head, the sadness returning "I couldn't bare to see the love of my life be shunned from the sunlight for the rest of eternity"  The young woman looked at him stunned, swapping at him she glared "You jerk!" The young man nodded understanding now. "Have a nice life as well" with that the older man walked out into the rain, and the woman followed after kissing her other lover on the cheek.

Author's Note

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