Through the Rain: Innocence.

Short story I wrote on October 29, 2007.

The two teens were wrapped up in each others arms; competely consumbed in love. The boys' arms were wrapped around her midsection, the girl pressing herself closer to him, resting her head between the gap by his neck and shoulder. The two gazed up at the stars above them, not saying a single word. Until the boy leaned his head towards hers and kissed her forhead whispering an "I love you". The girls smiled softly, the boy could feel the warmness rise up inside her, before the blush made an appearance on her cheeks, then she whispered the sweet words back to him. They closed the space between their heads, just as their lips were about to touch. The scene was washed away in a vortex of black. The two sat up in their own seperate beds, miles apart. The boys' heart sunk as he held out his empty hands remembering the warmness of his love in the dream.  At the same time a single tear ran down the girls' cheek clutching a pillow to her chest, wishing he was there with her. Both looked out their windows and watched the moon before returning to their pillows for a restless slumber.

Author's Note

Ignore spelling and/or grammar problems. I'd appreciate it if you'd comment on what you liked and/or disliked about my writing along with what I could improve on to make my next better.