Snuggles Arms Wide Open

Snuggles Arms Wide Open

A Poem by Snuggles
"

Snuggles is looking for some arms to jump up into

"

Snuggles Arms Wide Open

 

Setting here lonely

No one to hold me,

Wishing you would

Pick me up and,

Squeeze me

 

Snuggles bear soft

Snuggles bear clean

Snuggles bear,

Is peeking around the corner

Hoping to be seen,

 

Looking upon you, you and,

You

 

Arms wide open

Please won’t you hold me?

 

Lying down beside me

Feeling the rhythm of your

Heart beat

Snuggles can’t help

But giggle, seeing his toes wiggle

 

 

© 2009 Snuggles


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You know, I actually had a Snuggles bear when I was a little girl? I think it's in my box of things for my own children one day :)
Very sweet, without being too saccharine. One typo I think I found: "hoping" for the last line of stanza 2?
Something kind of plaintive about the 'please won't you hold me?' line. I guess even teddy bears need to feel loved.
~Katherine

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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awww this is cute hahah nice ryming :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know, I actually had a Snuggles bear when I was a little girl? I think it's in my box of things for my own children one day :)
Very sweet, without being too saccharine. One typo I think I found: "hoping" for the last line of stanza 2?
Something kind of plaintive about the 'please won't you hold me?' line. I guess even teddy bears need to feel loved.
~Katherine

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AW!! I freakin love bears...espically in teddy form. They make exclellent chew toys...mwaahhhh!!! Not but seriously, cute poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Awe this is so darling
Love this....Kimmy

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Aww, this is so cute! It's heartwarming and sweet! It makes me think of my own stuffed teddy bear! Great poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

oh my god i just want to squeeeeeeeezeeeeeeeeeeee you so tight...you have made my day ....x0x0x0 thank you for sharing such love and joy! x0x0x0x0

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awe! This is so sweet such a wonderful write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Ahh adorabley sweet. Great piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is a cute poem and the
writer must be a most loveable
creature, with wiggly toes
and who knows.

Rated 100 %

---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

The song with arms wide open came to mind when I read the title. this piece reminds us as human beings want to be held, loved and snuggle. I hope you find that comfort soon! ~ Jude :-)
PS Love your Avatar!

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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