"Will I Ever Be Enough"

I wonder

Will I ever be enough?

Will I constantly

Be compared to someone

Someone in your past?

No I won’t.

I won’t let that happen.

You say I’m different than her;

I know that I’m different.

I won’t lose the man of my dreams;

The father to our daughter;

The love of my life;

The other half of me;

My soul mate

For always,

Forever,

For all eternity.

Reviews

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

*Will I Ever Be Enough?*

[Tex]

Title suggestion: All Eternity
#2: Will I Be Enough?

I really like your style.

Well written.

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

Thank you again. I am glad that I have found someone that likes how I write. I was very nervous about starting to post my writings again...

[Tex]

i would suggest you post these each on there own, pick titles, and get them in some other rooms, you will find that people love them. you have great style.

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

I am going to start doing that. Once I have titles for them all. Right now though I am trying to get enough poems for a collection for my husband to read while he is gone on the road.

[LamentedHaven]

This is truly sad. I like how it ended abruptly leaving me wonder what will she do to obtain her soul mate? Perhaps there is nothing to do , but confess these feelings to win him back. *****

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

Thank you for the review. You have actually given me an idea for the next poem I write. I'll write the continuation of this one.