"As I Fade"

Through the tears

I cannot see

My eyes won't focus

I'm fading fast

But no one knows

Or notices how fast...

No one reads what I write,

Why I write, or

Between the lines I write.

I cry so my hard,

My body shakes,

It can't be stopped.

Even faster I fade

Until the one day

When I disappear.

No ones reading as I write.

No one cares why I write.

I'm fading as I write...

Reviews

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

*As I Fade*

[C.C. Marx]

I like this piece it seems very emotional! thx for the fr and you have a really interesting name by the way and as for a title....maybe As I Fade? I dunno I'm never good at naming things! well anyways nice job :)

[SnuggleBunnyQueen]

Thank you. It was an emotion piece. I have had this piece saved up for a while...I am trying to go through some of my old writings and posting them here because I need as much help as I can get. I'm not good at naming things either. I have several untitled pieces and actually though of doing an untitled collection.

[C.C. Marx]

Well that is a creative way to get by not naming things! *applauds* brilliant well I enjoyed this feel free to request anything you want reviewed and I would appreciate any reviews back :)