The final resolution

The final resolution

A Chapter by Snow_


I ponder
and ponder

And through ponder
I had wandered away
Away from my phone

I wandered away
And wander

A bird
I heard

She let me hear
Her soulful tune

How had I not heard
The birds sung tunes

I wonder for an answer
But I had found no answer

No answer but this

There is 
and there was

No comparison
To the wonders of the lord


© 2024 Snow_


Author's Note

Snow_
not complete just wanna share

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i'm enjoying it so far. i think you have found your voice - i find it sing-songy and euphonic.
just one edit: How did i not heard >>> How have I not heard
just grammar. i'm anxious to see where this goes, espescially with the ominous rope in Chapter One!

Posted 4 Days Ago


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4 Days Ago

Ahh thank you:D Sadly I had not found my voice yet...I am deaf so to speak...But i love this
Snow_

4 Days Ago

But I am close to finding it though...especially with my sonnets...It will end with a sonnet...if as.. read more

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