To my lost pen

It talks about a lost pen, how he is panicking now that his pen is lost

Where are you --my pen?

(Pause, Sobbing)

How can i walk a mile?

Without faking a smile?

If I can't hold my pen

Reviews

[Marie]

It is easy to mislay a pen, but you will find it when you least expect to, Snow. Don't worry, it will show up! Everybody has a favourite pen for writing! Thank you for sharing...

[Snow_]

Ahh thank you.

[Marie]

Most welcome Snow...

[Snow_]

Did you rate me? Can you rate me? If you want gonna turn it back on?

[Snow_]

I want the top writer award already hahaha

[Marie]

Hello Snow, thank you for your messages. I don't rate any writers. You will find on this group that most writers don't rate other writers. Wishing you a very nice evening to enjoy, Snow...

[Snow_]

Ohh i see thank you:D

[Marie]

Most welcome, Snow...

[Dave W.]

Let the pen go, if it was yours it will return, thank you for the poem

[Snow_]

Thank you...so much

[Dave W.]

of course.....

[Jeyanthi]

Then keep using typos.. it will come handy...
Continue writing...
Lost pen... but left an impression...

[Snow_]

What did you meant by keep using typos? I do not have one

[Jeyanthi]

Keep using typos- alternative way in writing.. ( in positive way, when one thing lost, trying to move on or like finding purpose... the need to continue (like expressing things in writing with the reflections we got from lost things-impressions)

[Snow_]

right you too....when one thing lost, trying to move on or like finding purpose... the need to continue (like expressing things in writing with the reflections we got from lost things-impressions)

With peace...

[Dennis Wolf]

Why not try a longer format? I mean, you'd have somewhat greater freedom of expression, no?

[Snow_]

I am a beginner poet. It is so hard. That is so true though. It also had been so long since i did poetry. What you told is so true.

[Dennis Wolf]

There is no harm in trying and practicing 🙂

[Snow_]

True right

[Snow_]

your suggestion done, I think it was better somewhat

[Tumi]

the sense of loss is well expressed
capturing emotions using the love for writing

[Snow_]

Thank you so much. I thought you would hate it. I was so nervous. Maybe you would think it was unclear hahaha

[Snow_]

What is so funny was i lost my pen the moment this came out hahaha.