What be I be Tomorrow?

What be I be Tomorrow? 

By: Adam M. Snow

Nae be I a wonder sorrow.

What be I be tomorrow?

Nae be I a dreamer of dreams;

What of the world, but life it seems.

Heart-wrung tears of perpetual sorrow,

Bringing forth an endless morrow.

To speak, but have no voice;

To live, but not by choice;

To see, but have no sight;

To love and to fight.

In heart-wrung tears of sorrow,

What be I be tomorrow?

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Poignant introspection here. Well penned and technically sound. Peace.

[Amila Jay]

Wow. this struck me at once. Your words are pure and have a deep meaning. like it. Excellent poem :))

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ah! you have the greatest flows in poems that tie together and never lose meaning! :D

[R J Askew]

Now there's a question! The same as today? A new person? It seems like a question that life itself cld well ask. We are little bits of life and have no idea. But maybe Life itself might have a better idea. I doubt it though. But that is the charm of being alive. We don't know the answer.

[PokemonFan#1]

Beautiful poem as always!

KEEP IT UP!

[Victoria Iankova]

I like this. Very well written.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Wow... very very well written, really nice. Your flow and rhyming, the words you use, all seems so effortlessly put. So nicely done. As if flawless... it's that nice. I enjoyed this.

[jennifer little]

exalent poetry great job keep up the good work and thanks for sharing this with me

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This speaks volume, in todays world..our lives today..and written of old.
This was lovely

[Jazique]

Oh I just love that I I meant he flowthe rhetorical questions that just make you think. I really like this and is this not what we think about everyday. What be I be Tomorrow because were changing everyday. Anyways well done'and I can definitlely say this one was one of my favorites by you and you can definitely identify some of the William Shakespeare in this writing style.