As Soulless as My Heart

As Soulless as My Heart

By: Adam M. Snow

Twinkle are the stars above me,

But they fade at my sight.

I've walked this road of death before,

But the feelings even heavier upon me.

I fornicate my sins betrothed,

I've tarnished my convalescence;

I be without seeing, as I cursed my essence,

As I curse my heart to death.

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Reviews

[PokemonFan#1]

I agree, it's got great feel.
It was beautiful.

KEEP IT UP!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Feeling is well in this. Nice write. Nice lines within this poem.

[Jazique]

Oh soulless as my heart that is quite sad but, either way well done deep short with meaning of overflow of sorrow emotions.

[Joshua Donahue]

Truly a good read. I like it. :)

[Amila Jay]

This is outstanding, very deep indeed! excellent write:-)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

IT almost reads like your telling a oved one how to encase ones feelings, not for protection but further torment, a most dilvuged and interesting read, well done.

[Spookers]

I like this. the way you write is lovely.

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ooh! its like magic flows through your pen :)

[Demi Rose]

magically delightful.

[Imagination-mage]

beautifu, that's all I can say