Soulless Knight

Soulless Knight

By: Adam M. Snow 

In my darkest hour spoke a lore, not I, not I.

Fornicate the world betrothed, but I, but I.

Extravagant thee of I be cheerful,

Naething be I but fearful.

Naething be I to wonder,

As hour froze, I ponder,

"Will it be a night enchantment?"

No, a night extravagant,

To be with thee a soulless knight,

As death would follow in spite,

As love would conquer all,

As it would be the fall.

The stars at night twinkle upon me,

A misty pass vision of thee,

Cloaked in putrid and raw indeed,

Carrying out the worldly greed.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

This poem is heavy -it creates its own center of gravity. Well penned

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh how you rhyme and rhyme in such a beauty, in such a flow... very nice.

[Jazique]

I get it but, lost at some angles and like the stanza that you had going I mean it doesn't look random. It may not be your best but, I do like it, not bad.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Lacking in the dept that you usually reek upon us, it falters to the point of reading, yet strong in context of wording, a great effort.

[Spookers]

This is good, as are all of your poems. The way you write makes me excited to read your next piece of work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and powerful words create a vision of sadness. When victories mean wins for the powerful and the losers are left with nothing. A knight can become soulless. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Demi Rose]

powerful and hard hitting.

[R J Askew]

Such are the types who have ruled our lives from their Wall Street offices for the last couple of decades. But, what is this? are the times a changing?

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*sighs* your writings are just soooo beautiful with excellent wording and even ones i have to look up :P be oh well i learn and then understand the beauty behind your poetry :D

[.quan.011.]

I am just going to say that this is a beautiful written poem and I wish i could express myself the way you do in your poems.