Soulless Reflection

Soulless Reflection

By: Adam M. Snow

 

Heart to leave upon my sleeve,

I wander tremendously.

The ink fade of a broken heart,

Upon my flesh, a tattoo bares not.

It be without saying as I be praying,

For a time not like this.

It seems that I may lost myself,

In time's frozen abyss;

Counting down till nature's calling,

As death takes me home.

I be without seeing as I be grieving,

For my soulless reflection.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You have a great way with words, flowing, beauty. Nice.

[Jazique]

Interesting and lovely words that entwine well to the title of ending s "soulless reflection" that seems to have so much depth. Well done.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Pure bliss, perfectly willed and executed, a most pleasant read.

[Spookers]

One word, "Lovely" The way you write is so melodic and beautiful. I just love reading your poems. Good job

[Coyote Poetry]

A broken heart can leave us weak and alone. Hard to regain strength to battle life and go forward. No weakness in this short poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Demi Rose]

charming and remarkable.

[Raven Starhawk]

So much time and effort is displayed here in your thoughtful words. It is perhaps silly of me to say I admired it, but it has class.

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i had to turn off the beatles music to read this and i'm going to say this....it was totally worth it!!!! i got the sad feeling considering the song was a happy song but whatever i can replay it but the poem would always be worth more great job!