Sorrow D'Crees

Sorrow D'Crees 

By: Adam M. Snow   

The night will be torn in twos, 

And days stripped away, 

And hearts shattered a thousand times, 

By the alleviant of sorrow d'crees. 

To wake and be no morrow. 

To love and live, but not live to love. 

A d'crees sought by woes of many; 

A heart shadowed by a stillness clock, 

By the foe of twenty men. 

A dream stripped from a child's grasp, 

Shattered by a hellish song 

Sung by a acute sorrow, 

By the likes of sorrow d'crees. 

Reviews

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Very well-written and perfect picture!

[Ripple of Aqua]

Tragice and graceful. I adore the reality of this piece.

[Jazique]

Yes yes you do write like William Shakespeare and that is why i clap and say bravo as and I just love the line " To love and live, but not live to love." That just speaks louder to me but, I enjoyed this piece write here and their is definitely a unique distinction to your writing as it pieces together you know it yours, which of course is a good thing to have your own unique style which is to that I say "excellente."

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice write, not sure what to say but I do like this a lot. Love this part here:
"To wake and be no morrow.
To love and live, but not live to love. "

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awww then ending was sooo sad but then again not all poems are soo jolly excellent job as always i wish they're was better word for fanfriggintastic :)

[PokemonFan#1]

A beautifully sad poem! Keep it up!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is sad. It is true in some ways. The wording is done outstandingly and you get your message across.

[Coyote Poetry]

Such strength and beauty in the words in the poem. The poem is filled with sadness. I still desire to read the poem a few time for the language and emotion. A strong ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

For me this whispers artistic magnificence. At its best it opens the mind.

[Demi Rose]

a stimulating read!