A Love without a Song

A Love without a Song

By: Adam M. Snow

I humble not for I but to wake again

Even though I may have sinned,

I've sinned for you, not for I.

I've loved no one but myself.

I dream of no one but I.

But it's you I see at night.

It is you my reflection choose,

Not your ghost for my sake but I.

But I humble not for I and not for you;

I humble without saying, an unjust love.

I see what of the world behind us.

I see an unjust life of eternal bliss,

A love without a song;

I see the forever us.

I humble now and forever among all things.

Until I see again, I am blind to you.

Until my time of death draws near

and yours as well,

We to be drowned upon sorrow, forevermore.

Reviews

[Imagination-mage]

what a beautiful poem! loved it!

[Muse]

The title speaks for itself. A love without a song is like a bird that can't sing. It's pointless and weak. There's no greater sorrow than a glass half full, or a love that runs on half empty.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love can melt the coldest of hearts, it can give us strength in moments of weakness and make us cry when we are happy. It is always worth the sacrifice.