A Love without a Song

A Love without a Song

By: Adam M. Snow

I humble not for I but to wake again

Even though I may have sinned,

I've sinned for you, not for I.

I've loved no one but myself.

I dream of no one but I.

But it's you I see at night.

It is you my reflection choose,

Not your ghost for my sake but I.

But I humble not for I and not for you;

I humble without saying, an unjust love.

I see what of the world behind us.

I see an unjust life of eternal bliss,

A love without a song;

I see the forever us.

I humble now and forever among all things.

Until I see again, I am blind to you.

Until my time of death draws near

and yours as well,

We to be drowned upon sorrow, forevermore.

Reviews

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

This is my other favorite too now!
Well done as usual!

[tynamite]

This is beautiful and so enchanting.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Deep and engulfing. I was sucked inthe mOment you said "I've sinned for you, not for I." beautiful.

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so beautifully enchantedly written as always...

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really really nice. Love the title, nice lines... different, and nice.

[PokemonFan#1]

Beautiful! I just love your work! Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. First lines got my attention then the poem change direction.
"Even though I may have sinned,
I've sinned for you, not for I."
A strong ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Demi Rose]

such a remarkable poem.

[Raven Starhawk]

A lovely poem with a interesting title.

[?]

Beautiful poem...Love the title
Love has many discriptions..but in the end I think love wins

This reminded me of Romeo and Juliet for some reason