A Year of Timely Hell

A Year of Timely Hell

By: Adam M. Snow

The hour cries at charming bell

Bringing forth a timely hell,

With sorrow and madness, and many more;

Leaving upon us a deathly score.

A death to live with, from a bloodshed wage

From a child of anguish and solstice rage;

Leaving us in tears of what is to come

Leaving us in ruins and in glum.

No reason to fight on,

No reason to fight strong.

Its not our life to fight for.

Its not our time to fight a war.

It is our time to die and live again,

In a life, free of this worldly sin

Reviews

[tynamite]

Wow this is amazing. If it's a concrete poem, that's good too. It makes the time pass slowly.

[TL Boehm]

It ain't over til its over.
This is a strong poem. we keep fighting even after the fight has left us.

[MoriartyMesa]

I bet in a small fox hole some where on a burning smoke filled field of France, nearly a hundred years ago. someone was sitting, preying, wishing, hoping for something. but those words were ready on his lips

[Ripple of Aqua]

This was more of a rougher edge to the natural darkness you alway speek about but none the less imaginative.

[PokemonFan#1]

Yay for rhyming couplet!

It was a great Poem!

KEEP IT UP!

[Darksummerswind]

Very dark and gloomy. Really excellent on strong emotion and emphasis.

[Coyote Poetry]

That is a old photo. The old wars were terrible. Where thousand of men would died in seconds taking a beach. I lost family in Asia and in Europe. Their memories stayed with my Grandmother till her death. A powerful poem. Soldiers died and wars never stop. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

This seems so powerful, not much for me to say because it just sort of blew my mind in some way... well done.

[Demi Rose]

actually this might be a well penned poem but it was also such a amazing concept as well.

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your poems are great period! or exclamation points!!!!