As Her Notes Glisten the Wind

As Her Notes Glisten the Wind

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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Never again, will I wake my siren within And let her sing a requiem tune. Erasing the words until it is sung As my life be dead by spoken croon.

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As Her Notes Glisten the Wind
By: Adam M. Snow

 

Never again, will I wake my siren within
And let her sing a requiem tune.
Erasing the words until it is sung
As my life be dead by spoken croon.
Never again, her notes glisten the wind
But softly it reigns burden be my heart.
Her voice chill the air upon me
And by that dost my soul depart.
Quaintly I long for a foolish song
From the writer who sung mute.
The words like a pendulum above my chest
Hanging perfectly acute.
Never again, I bow my head to shame
My siren's voice dost be angels lips.
I am captivated by such hellish song
That left my world in eclipse.

© 2012 Adam M. Snow


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So enhanced in its dream like quality and it's fluid movement. Along with the older English it gives it a slight medevil gothic theme. I admire so much from this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I LOVE IT! it is very pretty and very well written I love the way it all flows together


Posted 12 Years Ago


Reminds me a bit of Poe, yet this is unique in its own way... very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really loved this poem, so sweet and loving, yet it sounds like ur trying to distance urself from ur love. keep it up, i love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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never fall for the siren they'll just make you crash but you obviously you knew that =^^= i can't wait to see your writing become famous ^(^-^)^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Magnificent piece. Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Inspiring...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I read this personally and think of certain sirens inside me that do cry and wail me on and on and onto the rocks from time to time. I like it very much when I read a poem that triggers such feelings in me. I think such an outcome proves the words are effective, mean something to the reader.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Strong words allow the reader to fall into the words. Our muses can make us write of beauty or hell. Of passion or loneliness.
"Quaintly I long for a foolish song
From the writer who sung mute."
In my madness. I wrote poetry. The muses effect always seem to hold on till we can find another. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


So life inspiring. I read your words and am entranced.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

Phoenix , AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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