The Bearer of False Smile

The Bearer of False Smile

By: Adam M. Snow

Ye humble thyself upon thy altar,

Calling upon thy bearer of false smile;

Lest be known thy truth are lies,

Yet oneself ye defile.

But one day ye would lose thyself,

And thyself would lose thy heart;

And by the month of twelfth be told,

The wake which lies apart.

Reviews

[Jenni-Chan]

Yup.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like this, enjoyed. The Old English type of words you love to use, I just love seeing them in your writes more and more with each of your poems. Really nice.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Grave yet angelic and innocent. Sought through the eyes of a child who knows many men.

[PokemonFan#1]

Waaa! This poem sounded so sad!

**sniffle** I loved it!

KEEP IT UP!

[Jazique]

Wow it seemed like a riddle, you truly write like William Shakespeare at time because I sure didn't understand him half the time either. But, I tip my hat to you and clap my hand in encore! Bravo!

[_]

that reminds me of me wow your poems are phenominal :)

[Demi Rose]

liked the poem much!

[WhiteWillow]

Wonderful piece. I enjoyed reading your different style; transported me to another time.

[Tate Morgan]

The oldenglish is roguish to be sure But fairenough to understand Anexcellant piece a truework of art
Tate

[realmwriter]

I have to agree with Raven Starhawk, very cryptic. And very well done. What does it profit a man to gain the world and loose his soul?