Apparition Despair

Apparition Despair

By: Adam M. Snow

My ghostly apparition doest not be seen,

by thy child of my ghostly fiend.

But though the twinkle lights despair me;

my wake be that of a lore of me.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

You touched feeling good within this, I love the words you chose and the simple amount of space used for the poem, just to say enough. Nice.

[PokemonFan#1]

Beautiful poem!

Keep it up!

[Jazique]

Nice mystically , reminds me of Casper the friendly ghost. Anyways well done on a nice short sweet and interesting poem.

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its so sad :( aww ghostly friends how we enjoy thier company but its sad when they have to go especially when they're the only ones we have.

[Rose of Gondor]

Sad, dark, and hauntingly beautiful at the same time, all in 30 words. Amazing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting tale in the short poem. I try to stay away from ghostly fiends or friends. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

[StarNinja]

Doesth not be seen? My Ye Old English isn't very polished, but I'm pretty sure that's not a word. Like, maybe 78% sure. Or maybe 82%. Everything else is pretty solid, though.

[Inyourshadow]

What aperitions haunt you my friend, wasted chances badly choosen words or love lost through a combination of both.

Whatever the reasoning I love the feeling of sadness, keep em' coming

[Jenni-Chan]

interesting. i like it.