Bells in-Towered

Bells in-Towered

By: Adam M. Snow

 

By the name of those untold,

Benights the day, the lost behold.

Anchor down the bells in-towered,

ring no more, and be devoured.

Reviews

[Ripple of Aqua]

I think you've made me view rhymes completely different from now on. This was hypnotic.

[realmwriter]

Ok, so lets not point out the obvious here. And SCREAM THE INOBVIOUS, SILENCE IS DEAFENING and it screams in your ear when the bell toles for the. Excellent write my friend.

[PokemonFan#1]

Spectacular! Keep it up!

[VelvetRosetta]

As I often say, true art is held within few words...you my friend, painted a picture with so little, and left behind a Mural!!!
Awesome!

[Coyote Poetry]

A complete poem in so few words. I like the story in this poem. When the bell is silenced. The quiet can leave us feeling empty. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Seshat Nidaba]

This was lovely Adam, pretty epic for the sound of a bell, or its absence.

[.quan.011.]

This is a short yet sweet poem. It was awesome yet i didn't find anything really dark about it. Maybe I read it wrong. Anyway it is still an amazing poem.

[michaela]

Wow! It is short, but powerful! It's dark and somber, but wonderful! Bravo!

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gah! short and dark yet very potent :)

[Jazique]

Wow you're doing at short poem as to add so much depth into only few words "rind no more, and be devoured." Like that line and nicely done all and all as to be towered down and taken no more by the untold.