Lost in Darkness

Lost in Darkness
By: Adam M. Snow

I thought that I am, but I am no more,
I am that which is lost, and many more.
Being the one, the one of false name,
I long for that whom be the same.
I long for that in stillness night,
that carries away in outstretched light.

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I feel the same way as you do!
Nice write.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Another great piece and your rhyme scheme for this one is perfect!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Another wonderful poem my friend. I love the last two lines!

[RedInk524]

Interesting... Makes me think of the soul of the deceased that is stuck in this world. Short and sweet, thats the power of poetry- Packing an enormous punch with a little package.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

You seek death ? Ghost ... hummmmm

[Sweets]

This is wonderful...
Flows perfectly =)

[Jenni-Chan]

wow. that's all i can say. don't worry, it's a good wow. but wow all the same.

[Raven Starhawk]

Purely artistic. I consumed your well composed stanzas and thought they explained the very pit of darkness we all sometimes allow to overwhelm us.

[?]

I thought that I am, but I am no more, that line says so much.
And right now that is how I feel in my life.
The last two lines make the perfect ending to this piece
Awesome

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

direct ad perfect, the way wording should be, well done, good read.