Lost in Darkness

Lost in Darkness
By: Adam M. Snow

I thought that I am, but I am no more,
I am that which is lost, and many more.
Being the one, the one of false name,
I long for that whom be the same.
I long for that in stillness night,
that carries away in outstretched light.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

Somber, peaceful, tranquil. This floats you away on an effortless cloud. It seats you softly in a big, cozy recliner and lets you linger there for as long as you like.
Yet in the same hand, when you wake from the slumber it put you in, it leaves you moody and regretful of having to get up. It leaves you wanting to read it again, to go back to that dreamy ethereal state of mind it puts you in at the end. Bravo...! A perfect balance of sombrence and moodiness. I wanna read more of this...!

[WhiteWillow]

A beautiful poem. So simple and tranquil, it carries me to my stillness...

[Muse]

I find my inspiration when it's most quiet...so I can relate to this writing. Well done Adam. Thank you for sharing.

[PokemonFan#1]

Brava! Keep it up!

[ToxicMelody]

I've felt like that many times. Simple and deep. I like this.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Most of us are searching for the stillness of the night where the mind can find rest. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kenneth The Poet]

Stellar darkness.

[SabrinaThePoet]

i feel like that sometimes, i like this.

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*sighs* yes i know the feeling of being lost that way quite frightening.

[Jazique]

Wow lost in the darkness to which you search for yourself that is who you are is the best way to describe it as the stillness night you say the same as day wha am I to who I am not. Anyways well done.