Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

By: Adam M. Snow

 

My heart does not ache

With every love I take

Your voice over-shadows

My lame. I repose

Despite your treachery

Of our love contrary;

Living our unholy masquerade,

Afraid and betrayed.

Your voice does linger still,

Though it be your will;

With every breath I speak,

Though I'm lame and weak-

I speak with my sorrow:

"Will you still love me tomorrow?"

Reviews

[Jazique]

Aw such a strong and powerful poem seeking the answer to what we ask others and what we may even ask ourselves at time "Will you still love me tomorrow?" Truly only tomorrow can tell but, anyways nice poem with words of description of the emotions and all. Well done keep up the marvelous work and ideas.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love the rhyming in this, it flows real nicely. The last two lines i love.

[Tasha]

This was so strong, I liked the desire and emotion. This was a promising question.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire and the emotion of this poem. Sometime we allow ourselves to fall into dangerous situations. I like the complete poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem. Some questions can lead to the wrong answer?
Coyote