Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

By: Adam M. Snow

 

My heart does not ache

With every love I take

Your voice over-shadows

My lame. I repose

Despite your treachery

Of our love contrary;

Living our unholy masquerade,

Afraid and betrayed.

Your voice does linger still,

Though it be your will;

With every breath I speak,

Though I'm lame and weak-

I speak with my sorrow:

"Will you still love me tomorrow?"

Reviews

[Jazique]

Aw such a strong and powerful poem seeking the answer to what we ask others and what we may even ask ourselves at time "Will you still love me tomorrow?" Truly only tomorrow can tell but, anyways nice poem with words of description of the emotions and all. Well done keep up the marvelous work and ideas.

[LochnezzMonster]

Sounds like a story of someone who loves another and is not loved back the way they may want to be. Very emotional and captivating, I would say. There's always something in a story, poem, chapter that has to begin to hold the reader. In this poem the end of the first stanza does that for me. "Shadows my lame" ...VERY good wording that pretty much got my attention and made me finish ^.^

[Brytt]

I like the way you separated the lines even though some of the punctuation does not line up. It puts a break in the system, mirroring how the narrator seems to feel. Very nice!

[Shelly Braen]

A cold and hurtful place, never better depicted than within this piece. The degradation of such a fine heart, always dangling between bitter-sweet. How fine you let flow the insecurity and uncertainty that only a love abandoned can bring. Yet again, a powerful and striking piece.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

lovely piece!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Wonderfully penned poem.

[Demi Rose]

answers u seek are hard to find if u do not know where to look or r looking in the wrong places. good poem.

[Kenneth The Poet]

This packs a solid punch. Short, rhythmic and stunning.

[Azariek]

Aw, so much emotion squeezed into fourteen lines

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

It almost seems familiar as you read it. Like a book you've read several times, but you know you don't remember the part. Very well written and the rhyme scheme just moves it along very easily.
I did enjoy reading this

-Marie-

[Daytonight]

Lovely write. Keep on penning!