Glance Upon Her

Glance Upon Her

By: Adam M. Snow

 

I see her, such beauty shrouds of light,

I'd glance upon her morn, noon and night.

Such innocence follows thee,

Like branches of stars we see,

She knows not my name,

But I be the blame.

O' Antoinette, names like a rose,

Blossoming after fall of snows.

But I be to thee but a ghost,

My love for you is what I boast.

Thou kept seeth right through me,

Though I dream of thee,

A dream soon to die,

If thou not seeth my eye,

My feeling to whom should embrace,

From the depth of love shone grace.

Reviews

[vanila bean]

I really like this.
Good job!
:) vb,

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the style and feel of old in this poem. To describe beauty is a art. The skill of a writer to make something beautiful like you did. Take great skill. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Farrah Grahm]

I see you have no use for contemporarypoetry and modern language! I think you've donne a great job bringing this style into the present. It sounds like music darling. Good job

[Kaylor Mason]

This one's beautiful.

[Dushyant Thadani]

That was really sweet man... Very cute... Just loved it....

[Jazique]

Awe that was beautiful. Enjoyed the "My feeling to whom should embrace, From the depth of love shone grace." to glance upon her and grace is what shone. Nicely done and spelling grammar seem flawless.. Keep up the work.

[Daytonight]

So very well penned. Loved the old world flavor of it. Keep on penning.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

really nice i liked these lines:
"Thou kept seeth right through me,
Though I dream of thee,
A dream soon to die,"