O Fragile Heart

O Fragile Heart

Written by Adam M. Snow

This mechanical heart,

beating slowly

-- imperfectly.

Such fragile, like glass

to fall apart,

-- shattered

as moments pass.

-- Beating,

-- depleting,

as it stops,

-- silent.

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Reviews

[Senu Jayasinghe]

Concise but heartfelt. Amazing.

[MoriartyMesa]

Coming from an old school Metal Head, THIS IS METAL !

[Darksummerswind]

Very powerful, yet simple. It does a good job conveying a great message. The picture does what it needs to convey the image yet I found myself more drawn to that than the words a bit.

[Barbara Walker]

So much conveyed in so few words. Not easy to do, my friend, but you nailed it. Kudos!

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

A few words but full of beauty!! Picture matching so well with the poem!
Wonderful writing friend!!

[kianatahleigh]

I love how simple the poem is; while still conveying power and a lot of emotion.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and worthwhile use of words. The reader felt the pain of a dying heart. No wasted words. just outstanding poetry shared Adam.
Coyote

[wordman]

so even a mechanical heart can be broken

[andrew mitchell]

and that about sums it all up, in a beat life stops