A sad day for us. The world changed and we didn't know yet.
"Fifteen years has passed yet still I remember,
of that fateful morning of September.
Still I remember of that day
when the sky turned to gray."
9-11 changed the world. Not for the better. Thank you my friend for sharing the powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote
This was the day, not just America would remember but every other nation. It was a dark day that shattered the two towers and turned them into ashes. Many lost their lives leaving behind their loved ones to suffer in pain of remembrance.
That was a wonderful poem in remembrance of that day. Can't believe it's already been 15 years, oh how time has passed. Anyways you did great, describing everything wonderfully, a great rhythmic flow, and most of all capturing the essence of that day and feeling we probably felt a few days afterward.
A sad day for us. The world changed and we didn't know yet.
"Fifteen years has passed yet still I remember,
of that fateful morning of September.
Still I remember of that day
when the sky turned to gray."
9-11 changed the world. Not for the better. Thank you my friend for sharing the powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote
Nice remembrance, I think the image of the billowing gray cloud of concrete dust is what people remember the best. Everything it rolled over became a ghostly reminder of all the lost souls taken in the twin towers collapse. Bravo! With efforts like this, they will not be forgotten,I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!
Our history is what defines us as a strong nation. Remembering the triumphs and the heart wrenching moments retells our strengths. Thank you for not forgetting and preserving our history through this poem. Worthy write :)
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