Take Flight, Dear Crow of Mine

Take Flight, Dear Crow of Mine
Written by Adam M. Snow

Take flight, take flight dear crow of mine.
Why perch you calmly on a pine?
The world we live in great design,
see yourself in what life entwined.
Spread your wings in the divine;
take flight, take flight, dear crow of mine.

All is well and all is fine,
see how the sun to west incline,
let your feathers' flutter shine.
lift your voice, my nightly sign.
With you do I myself entwine;
go forth, take flight, dear crow of mine.

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Reviews

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A very nice poem, Adam.

Comparisons with Poe's "The Raven", yes, but also original in its own right.
I love the rhyme scheme used and the use of repetition, giving this a somewhat Elizabethan texture, something i am quite fond of as a poet myself.

Good Job!

[T.W. Early]

I love the rhythm of this piece, for some reason I read it to a sort of internal tune. That makes this stand out.

[Robert Haigh]

Oh to fly like a bird! An evocative write - I like it!

[Distant Reality]

Hello Adam, this was a very nice and calming poem. One to remember.

[TL Boehm]

a lovely poem reminiscent of "Blackbird" - with that oldworld quality to it.

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This is a soft melodic wind, a whisper of freedom, a song of heart and soul, a love of journey...gorgeous :)

[t.m.]

I enjoyed this a lot. It's a brilliant piece.

[Barbara Walker]

Why perch you calmly on a pine
And
Spread your wings in the devine.

Two of my favorite lines.

[Katrina Mckeown]

I found this poem interesting and thought provoking. ...similar to Edgar Poe s The Raven!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry my friend.
"With you do I myself entwine;
go forth, take flight, dear crow of mine."
Good visions and thoughts left by good words and description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote